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'cause we're gonna have a party. A springtime party!

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:iconproyektvampyre:
Okay, I've been dying to write another critique.

I'll start for the obvious, as much as I would love to see the flower with more sharpness and less blur I must say that the way some parts of the picture are out of focus adds a lot of charm to the shot, it calls the attention to the center of it and allow us to enjoy it better.

Now, what I don't like about this is the background, I don't know if it is too dark or the angle is just wrong, but somehow it looks as if it were about to swallow the whole picture.

I know that this kind of shots can be particularly tricky, so my advice is to keep practicing.
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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
1/640 second
F/4.0
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400
Apr 22, 2009, 4:05:38 PM

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